The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/06
This is interesting and I liked the way you talked about how we sometimes hide behind our "faces". It's an interesting concept. Keep writing!
I enjoyed the "paperclip"
personification. the story was interesting and the faces are something we all do! Keep Writing!
11/27/06
You make some very interesting points here. The story felt a touch disjointed, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Keep writing!