The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this article! Your contrast/comparison between earthly physicians and "The Great Physician" was spot on!

I especially liked the sentences about how He knows us so we don't need to "fill out those annoying family history forms" and that we don't need insurance or an appointment with Him, and that He WANTS to see us when we are well. So true and well said!

Now just a couple of little pointers: If you put a space between your paragraphs it makes it easier to read. And I would have made a new paragraph for your excellent section that starts with
"Isn't it good to know"

Thanks for sharing this article, and kudos to you for plunging into the weekly challenge! Keep writing. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
11/13/06
What more needs to be said? Amen! Well done. This is a very true and powerful testimony.
Just the reminder we need sometimes! Good job, this was great!