The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a little different than I was expecting, but a with a very vivid character. I was hoping there was more, but good job.
This was a good story, it flowed well as the charactors related to each other. A little dark, yet, the hope of Light was there. It ended a little quickly, leaving me to wish for more, a second chapter perhaps, a happier ending?
Sometimes there isn't a happy ending. Thats the problem with the selfishly fickle human mind.