The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/06
Wow. This makes me stop and think. Their only hope is Jesus and we have to pray that the messengers won't shirk in bringing the gospel to those who think there's no hope. The raw emotion here was clearly depicted in your words.
Yes, there is a mission field out there. The world needs hope. You do a great job of painting a gruesome picture of life without the hope of Christ. What else can I say? Thank you for the reminder. May we all have a heart for the lost.
This is very deep. And beautiful, excellent job, and very vivid descriptions.
11/02/06
Your imagery haunted me and spurred me to real thought. Wonderful wonderful WONDERFUL! Congratulations!
Vivid! Congratulations on your 2nd place win. You deserved it.