The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the creative way you got your point across! Your fresh approach and the unique manner in presenting your thoughts kept me interested and entertained throughout! It took a while for me to follow what you were doing but once I did it gelled together nicely! Good work!
This is absolutely wonderful! Definitely one of the best I've read. Simple and direct, your message carried true. :)
10/19/06
A good reminder and it was easy to understand. The repetition and similarity of the phrasing was a good touch, also. Well done!
10/20/06
I really loved this! You did a great job in illustrating your point. Thanks for writing this!
10/21/06
Excellent.
10/24/06
What a wonderful creative way to pose this prompt. I enjoyed reading this and the way you wrote it kept my attention. Thanks.
10/24/06
Wow! Great job. The parallels you drew are excellent.
10/27/06
And this is your first entry for the challenge? This is GREAT. It's really tight and punchy. Excellent, excellent, excellent.
10/27/06
This is a wonderful piece! Something every reader can relate to...at one time or another. Well Done!