The Official Writing Challenge
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I found this piece original and moving! I liked it! You have skill as a writer! keep up the good work!
This was beautiful. I really enjoyed the flow and meaning. You have a gift for crafting words!
Very good progression here--I'm curious why you chose "defeated" as the title, as the essence of the poem is the victory.
I think the title is "Consumed". It appears the Defeated is a title for the section. There are titles for different sections. Interesting idea?
I found this really interesting and "colourful". It kept my interest and I love how you write.