The Official Writing Challenge
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A good effort! I like your creativity! You should keep writing! Two quick pointers, you should read more extensively to develop your vocabulary and before you submit your work, you should read it aloud to someone else and ask for their honest feedback.

I sense an energy to your writing, a current that runs beneath the surface, something that's just waiting to spring out and bless us all! Whatever you do - Keep writing! I believe there's greatness in you! God Bless!
If you're new to FaithWriters, I'm pretty sure you probably formatted your lovely poem in Word or some other application, and were surprised to see how it came out on this page. Feel free to e-mail me for some hints on how to fix this in your future entries.
I liked being "consummed" by your entry. I could sense your style in the words and phrases you used. Enjoyable piece. Keep writing.
You expressed some excellent ideas in this article, and I encourage you to keep writing. A good story and portrayal of a soul reaching out for the true peace of God.