The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/06
I really enjoyed reading this story! I thought it was great the way you used parenthesis to display the real life voice that didn't quite make it into his fantasy world. And then when his aunt did finally bring him back to reality the parenthesis were gone. I thought this was a unique idea for an article on this subject. I truly did enjoy reading it!
10/13/06
Really precious--I could just picture this little guy.
10/15/06
A very nice story and it made me smile. Very well told!
Very cute. I, too, liked the dialogue in parentheses.
10/17/06
Super. A enjoyable read top to bottom. The dialogue with the parentheses works, although probably a technical error - sometimes the rule needs to be broken. A well told story - thank you.