The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
What I liked about it - I loved the dialogue and the boy's description. Immediately captured my attention. This would make a great devotional.
What I might change - Maybe make it abit longer- perhaps only because it was so good - I hated it to end.
08/26/06
I wish it were longer, too! It's short but profound. Bravo!
Good title, too. Scooped me in!
08/27/06
Definitely a great message - and I also would have loved for you to take this a bit further, made it a touch longer. I also adored the title. Nice job!