The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
Great paraphrase on the Protical son!
08/27/06
Interesting, modern take on the prodigal. Well written - though, in my opinion anyway, the whole relationship, etc. with the step-mom seemed unnecessary. I wasn't sure exactly what the "point" of her was - but it could just be me! Thanks so much for writing, and keep it up!
I enjoyed the modern approach to this story. Good use of dialogue.