The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
Beautiful devotional with lots of wisdom. Thanks for sharing how the Lord used your personal story as an avenue of ministry to others. Good work! :)
08/17/06
Thanks for this testimony! Watch out for run-on sentences...with a few edits, this piece is something to be shared with a Bible study group.
08/22/06
Try reading each sentence aloud, and that might help with commas and sentence flow.

Otherwise, this is a good, well-organized essay and analogy. Good job!
08/22/06
A really great message in this story, not to mention written well, also. Food for thought, which I needed, as I do get in the valley of depression and your entry has encouraged me immensely. Thank you for sharing.