The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the idea, but I'm not sure if my brain is just tired, but I had a hard time following the storyline at times. I think you tried to pack too much into the word count. But you have some awesome characters and a great storyline for a longer piece. I liked your take on the topic and you definitely made me stop and think, which is always a good thing.