The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/22
A graphic sweep through human history, and God's intervention. Well told.
05/02/22
A good retelling of the fall and Jesus’ sacrifice. We’ll done.
05/02/22
"Surely the creator felt greater pain" stuck out to me and left me thinking of this throughout the day. It's not that I hadn't thought of this before, but the way you inserted it into your prose made me pause and reflect all over again!
05/04/22
The birth of pain so well told, and as your lines show - pain that would afflict and affect both God and man! But praise God it will one day end!
Love the biblical storytelling.