The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully, powerfully written. Nails the topic. I hope this catches the judges' eyes.

Well-written and inspiring!
An intriguing allegory with vivid imagery.
I think I was holding my breath. This story is SO good - and well written. You had my attention from the first paragraph, and the tension and conflict built up to your hopeful ending. As far as red ink goes, I see only very minor tweaks. PM me if you'd like, but I wouldn't be too concerned. Well done on this topic! Your antagonist gave me "chills". ;)

Congratulations on ranking 22 overall! Happy Dance!