The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/12
This is a sweet story with a cute ending. Clever how the mess of someone's cornbread could be used by God.

In the second paragraph, you said "apples pies" instead of "apple pie". I thought there was another typo like that, but now I can't find it.

I love that the husband was so sweet and caring, even while pointing out his wife's obvious inability to make cornbread. And I love the fact that he "boasted" about her in the final sentence. Very sweet way to conclude the story and it made me smile. :)
07/20/12
I enjoyed this so much...and I got so hungry while reading it, I got up to get a candy bar! This was touching and sweet on so many levels. Thank you.

God bless~
07/24/12
I enjoyed this story very much. Your characters have great personalities that come through in the well-written dialogue. Great job.
What a great way to present your message. Very effective and I really liked the love you showed between the husband and wife. Congratulations on your EC.