The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/12
Oh wow. I love this. Great job creating atmosphere and feeling with this entry. I felt like I was there, right in the middle of it.
02/12/12
Well done, to get the Peter's own feelings about what was happening
02/12/12
Great job with this! I loved the entire piece. Imaginative and well written.
God bless~
This is a lovely retelling of Peter's anguish. Many have written this week about the life and death of Jesus, but you are the first to tell it from Peter's POV.
02/13/12
The whole chain of events... Jesus capture and crucifixion and resurrection appearance would all certainly be astonishing to Peter, every step of the way— and you have shone that in this wonderfully written piece! Great job.