The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/11
I truly enjoyed this story...And, especially the best friends, makes me miss mine all the more. I especially loved this part: "the designs on my legs go well with my purple dress and red hat" hahahahahahahahahaha...Loved it. God Bless~
09/02/11
A sweet story - your writing is very descriptive. I'm so glad your MC got such a marvelous surprise for her birthday! Nice job!
09/06/11
Oh how I laughed when I read this…sounds like descriptions I would write of myself! And I could relate to the feelings - I hated turning fifty too and now I am way past that! LOL And the ending was wonderful – a gift beyond her expectations! Enjoyed the read - Great job!
Really funny and well done. Love it! Fifty doesn't sound old to me. I passed that year ages ago and I still feel young. Well, most of the time anyway.