The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
Very nice poem on yellow. So well done.I loved every description from the sun shining on things.
11/20/09
Fun poem!
11/21/09
Oh, I like this. So good!
This put a smile on my face. Adorable!
Super poem, very well written. Well done!
11/24/09
Great! What fantastic rhymes! 'Yellow' and 'tell though' - love 'horizon' and 'laid your eyes on'! Brilliant.
11/25/09
Can't read without a smile on my face all the way through. I can see it all. Then the praise...

Mona
11/25/09
Love how you transitioned from purple to yellow! :) You have beautiful scenes for your reader. I love your ending!