The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
It's on topic, creative and I'm impressed at how you kept up the rythym throughout. You know how to tell a story in poetic form and that isn't easy to do. Awesome!
01/25/07
I absolutely love how light this piece is in the beginning, and how its reverence at the end still seemed to flow so beautifully. And such a lesson!
This was fun to read, different in it's approach, and had a great lesson... I especially liked the idea of God winking and laughing... and I'm sure he does!

Great job!

A delightful read. Fun with a message.
01/31/07
Nice to see you have some fun and stretch your own wings a bit :)
01/31/07
Great read and very creative!
01/31/07
A wonderful poem! I also like the contrast between mischief and God's glory. A fun-to-read, well-written piece. Thanks for sharing it!
01/31/07
Linda, this is a hoot! Absolutely wonderful, and highly entertaining.
01/31/07
Wow! What a ride! :) And what fun. (and I bet you had a few chuckles writing this - Luce, indeed!)

Thanks for the smile and the lift.

PS. Oh sooooo good by the way.!