The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/21
A fun read. I love superheroes. Couple of things in the opening sentence I wouldn’t lead with the name of the villain it made me think she was the protagonist of the story. Also you don’t rob a prize you steal a prize. And I would break up some of your larger paragraphs into several paragraphs to make it more readable. Looking forward to more Speedster tales.
I always enjoy your stories and this one was no exception. You did an outstanding job of writing on topic. You kept me entertained from the beginning to the end. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 15th overall. Happy Dance!