The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/16
Good descriptions here. I enjoyed tagging along with Will as he worked, and I even smelled the coffee and the smoke from the fire. I also like the way you ended the story.
07/27/16
The setting is authentic and colorful and a nice tie in right on topic at the end.
I enjoyed a well written and well researched (I'm thinking) story of long ago.
07/28/16
Very good. Just a picky little comment. Your title is Fire Stater
07/28/16
Congratulations, Brenda, on finishing 1st place in the Advanced category.

Very authentic and moving.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 12 overall. Happy Dance!
07/30/16
Congrats!! Well done
08/09/16
I really liked your MC's idea of starting a fire in people.

You wrote a unique and engaging piece. Congratulations on your level win.