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By Wesley Hesketh
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
tears falling from my eyes.
How could I ask Him for help
with all my failing tries?
This time it was not for me
but for my dearest friend.
She lived with an abuser
in pain that will not end.
Sometimes she would sneak out of
her darken hiding place.
I was feeling her sadness
tears streaming down her face.
She said she’d give it a try
but failing was her curse.
Then she would have to face him
that would even be worse.
Tears were coming from my eyes
I stood before the King.
He has no time to answer
these troubles that I bring.
For I’m a lowly sinner
I know this might be true.
If you really do need Him
He’s always there for you.
Then I begin to praises Him
of how He’s such a friend.
The phone broke up the music
Almost near the very end.
She said that she was safe now
and there were people there.
Making sure he’s really gone
she’ll get the proper care.
That’s when I suddenly saw
the gift He gave to me.
He’s took her from her shackles
and now she’s walking free.
Isn’t God so wonderful
what He can really do?
He’s there when He is needed
just ask, He’s there for you.
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Where some work is needed is with the meter, the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables, which enhances the reading flow of a poem. For more on meter, See Jan's excellent lesson on it in the forums.
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?f=67&t=38314&sid=3d485cb0241c7edd37f4541db0cecfcc
Your love and care for your friend shines through beautifully.
Blessings~