The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 467 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/16/16
Nice re-telling from Mary M's POV. I think gripped has 2 p's.
04/17/16
Well done and well said.

Blessings~
04/18/16
This story brought many of the emotions of Mary M to the foreftont. I liked the flow of the story.
Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. Happy Dance.