The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my. Wow. I can't think of more appropriate words. I have tears in my eyes. Wow! What an outstanding piece. This is on my all-time favorite list. You grabbed my attention with the conflict right out of the gate. Then when I thought the story was over, you added that last paragraph. My gut still hurts from being punched. Sheer brilliance and what a wonderful message:Keep praying!
05/29/15
This piece brought tears to my eyes. This story was based on a true story but you brought it to life in a heartfelt, gut wrenching way. Thank you for sharing.