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11/26/15
Red ink: 3rd para. Leave out AMONG THE. Good message.
11/26/15
I think most of the time we are blind to what we do that irritates others. That is where we need God to show us.

Good message and good Bible verses to back up your message. Blessings, LaVonne
This is a nice devotion. The Bible is definitely full of great advice and you did a nice job of backing up your message with the perfect verses. I stumbled on some of your sentences. I'd urge you to read it aloud, or even better, ask someone else to do it. If you hear any stumbling, the chances are the sentences needs smoothing out. I think your prayer was perfect. I always like it when prayers are included because not everyone knows how to pray. Yours is worded just right.
12/01/15
I loved your closing prayer...beautiful.

God Bless~