The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This gave me goosebumps. You just never know.Well done.
This is a great story. You captured my attention in the first paragraph and held it to the very end. Many writers use the literary device of the mysterious stranger who turns out to be an angel. Often this concept can be over used and not fresh and original. However,I think you did a fantastic job of putting a fresh spin on this tool. Having the little girl find the puppy in the officer's arms was an act of genius.This is a delightful read!
01/22/13
Moving! Nice job.

God bless~
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