The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/13
Oh, this is GOOD. I loved the ending. Kept me on the edge of my seat and I sort of thought of who the cop might be when He called him by his name. Great story and great writing!
01/10/13
Very exciting! I'd like to hear more...is this the pilot for a novel in the making? I'll never forget the sound of my first blow-out, and your article brought it back to me. Of course, my vehicle and story were not nearly as colorful, but I thought the hole car had exploded when it happened. You've done a super job!
01/11/13
Gripping entry with a good message. Great job.
01/12/13
Hang on! checking to see if I'm okay! Wow - felt as if I was in the car the entire I read this. Lively and descriptive piece. Great job...very good writing.

God bless~
01/14/13
They say a title is worth a thousand words. Your title caught my attention and I loved the story. Well done.
01/17/13
Congrats on your HC! Well-deserved!