The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this is GOOD. I loved the ending. Kept me on the edge of my seat and I sort of thought of who the cop might be when He called him by his name. Great story and great writing!
Very exciting! I'd like to hear this the pilot for a novel in the making? I'll never forget the sound of my first blow-out, and your article brought it back to me. Of course, my vehicle and story were not nearly as colorful, but I thought the hole car had exploded when it happened. You've done a super job!
Gripping entry with a good message. Great job.
Hang on! checking to see if I'm okay! Wow - felt as if I was in the car the entire I read this. Lively and descriptive piece. Great job...very good writing.

God bless~
They say a title is worth a thousand words. Your title caught my attention and I loved the story. Well done.
Congrats on your HC! Well-deserved!