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This is an interesting take on the topic. I read another story that also touched on the seven deadly sins as junk food, but each story was unique and special in its own way. Nice job.
Ha! I think you and I were on the same wavelength with this one, but I like your take on the topic better! :-) Love the kitchen cupboard prop to communicate your message. Very nice.
09/09/12
Figurative writing illustrating the satisfaction derived from God's word as seen in two Bible verses!

He said to me, "Son of man, feed your stomach and fill your body with this scroll which I am giving you." Then I ate it, and it was sweet as honey in my mouth. (Ezekiel 3:3 NAS)

Your words were found and I ate them, And Your words became for me a joy and the delight of my heart; For I have been called by Your name, O LORD God of hosts. (Jeremiah 15:16 NAS)

Well done on a nicely written piece.

09/10/12
There is a lot of thought and wisdom in this. I enjoyed it. Good writing!