The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/12
I really liked this poem. It was different. I enjoyed the sequence structure.

Nicely done. God bless~
03/16/12
A very simple message with a very vital lesson for us all. Thank you!
I liked the rhythm and flow of this poem. Good job!
03/18/12
Tomorrow is another day, and what the future holds depends on what we do today. Good job on a well written piece. This ia an interesting approach to putting the message across in a poem. God bless.
03/20/12
short, sweet and to the point. Good message. God bless!
A crucial truth, sufficient unto the day. I am not knowledgeable on poetry but I like this. You express deep truth simply a talent given by our Lord, for certain.
Congratulations for placing 10th in level 3!