The Official Writing Challenge
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Short, powerful and to the point. Nicely told, and nicely written. Thanks.
God bless~
I enjoyed the3 cooking metaphors and thought it was quite clever. The only thing I would suggest is not to start your story with a dry definition. Pull the reader in right away with the exploding green gunk. I did like how you turned it into a lesson that is a timely one.
I really liked this. I enjoyed the emphasis on any trial or testing we go through in life is one in a "controlled" environment ... in the hand of God. That was such a powerful point for me. Well done!
Loved the dad's advice "No peace, no go." Powerful! I loved how you covered the various ways God speaks to us! Thanks for sharing! God bless!
Congratulations for ranking 9th in level 3!