The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/11
Good story line - and reference to the Garden Of Eden. I like that the child was "lost" but was found by his parents, and embraced and forgiven. As our Father in heaven will embrace all the "lost sheep" and welcome them home. Good job..God Bless~
08/03/11
You opened up some great reflection and dialogue, but you closed off well inside the word limit. I would have liked to see more of this. is there a second chapter in the wings????
08/04/11
Congratulations on HC win – your story contains so much food for thought written inside wonderful vision – your award is so well deserved!