The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/11
Cute! I especially liked Momma's wing on her hips. Very sweet story.
05/20/11
This made me smile, adorable little characters and story! Unique story to wrap around the challenge word! Kudos!
05/21/11
Adorable story - keep your writing coming - Thanks
05/22/11
I can picture this as an illustrated children's story. My little grandkids would love it! God bless!
05/25/11
A very interesting read! A tale showing what it means by nothing ventured, nothing gained.

Unless we put to use the talents and gifts God has bestowed on us and 'fly,' we are in danger of getting devoured by our enemy that prowls around if we choose to stay behind. Like untrained babes needing milk staying in our 'nests,' we can never unless we venture, fulfill God’s will for His purpose and for us.

Oh, I love this sweet story so many wonderful messages packed in.
Congratulations for ranking 9th in your level and 20th overall!!
Love this story, Theresa! You've captured the birds' personalities so well, and reminded me why I should be happy that my own fledgling is about to leave the nest. Keep it up, girl!!
Stacy
I loved this story. It should be a book with colorful illustrations to match the personalities of the characters.