The Official Writing Challenge
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This is well done and so very we true. I was going to do a fictional story similar toyour devo. Mine was going to be about memetics a type of " virus" that can cause people to spread gossip and mean words. You showed it very elegantly and the scripture and prayer were perfect. Thank you for your devotion to your devotions. They are often just want I need to hear.
Very nice devotional.
You covered a lot of great points. Consider taking a few key ideas and developing them, istead of packing your piece with multiple main ideas. Perhaps an illustration or two of some of the personal crises you mentioned in the first chapter wouold help to transition from one idea to the next.

Thank you for reminding us of where and to whom we can turn to in times of crises.
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