The Official Writing Challenge
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You definitely are quite talented with poetry. At times, I feel I miss some of the meanings of some poems, but your message was loud and clear. The footnotes really helped. Great job!
Wow! This is wonderful. Your message, your exquisite phrasing, everything! I love your Bible allusions (this is filled with them). Super work!
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 3!
I really enjoy the way you dress up biblical accounts w/ engaging metaphors. I have to admit it took me awhile to figure out Mo wasn't a tent-flap. :D While I don't tend to favor rhymy poems, it certainly works for the playfulness of this one. Very nice job, Nancy. Wish it placed higher.