The Official Writing Challenge
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You definitely are quite talented with poetry. At times, I feel I miss some of the meanings of some poems, but your message was loud and clear. The footnotes really helped. Great job!
02/16/11
Wow! This is wonderful. Your message, your exquisite phrasing, everything! I love your Bible allusions (this is filled with them). Super work!
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 3!
02/21/11
I really enjoy the way you dress up biblical accounts w/ engaging metaphors. I have to admit it took me awhile to figure out Mo wasn't a tent-flap. :D While I don't tend to favor rhymy poems, it certainly works for the playfulness of this one. Very nice job, Nancy. Wish it placed higher.