The Official Writing Challenge
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07/22/10
This is a delightful take on the topic and well explored to boot! I enjoyed it.
07/23/10
I really enjoyed this. I generally prefer to read stories or devotionals, but this kept my attention - great job!
This is a great poem, it made me chuckle, cringe, and nod my head. You did an unique perspective on how wanting to be the best can not give us what we really want and need.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level.