The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the POV It took me by surprise. I also liked the idea of setting traps to get rid of those pesky humans. Well-done.
This was very cute. I am such a critter lover that I can "feel" for the mice and you did a great job having the reader see their POV! Just love the name Guido, too.