The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. You brought me through her emotions of grief, frustration, annoyance, anger, love, and relief. Good job.
11/18/08
Ah, there is nothing like a girlfriend that God has placed in your life to help pull you through life's troubles. Good job:)
11/19/08
I LOVED this... I couldn't even begin to figure out the ending which makes it MORE fun... sweet take on the subject that warmed my heart.. very creative!
I loved the true to life picture you painted of her grief and all the other emotions that go along with grief. Glad she had Keisha in her life. Nicely done!
Oh my, if we all could have and be such friends to others! Great message showing the importance of keeping in touch and how it just might affect someone we care deeply about.
You write really, really, really well... excellent story and portrayal of this woman's pain. Did I mention that you write really well!!
Loved this one.
11/19/08
You grabbed me by the hand and ran me through - wow... wanted to get to know Keisha better too.