The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the repetition of the last word of each verse - very effective. Nicely done rendition of the prodigal.
I like this one a lot - it is a creative retelling of the parable of the prodigal son, written in a way we can all relate to.
Nicely done. Interesting form. I liked the progression of the MC's focus in the fourth line of each stanza. Being a creature of pattern, I might have liked to see lines two and three rhyme throughout.
Very effective use of repitition with the "-ing me" throughout in the 4th lines. I liked this one a lot.
Wow, how creative is this!!! I was tapping my toes to this clever rhyming example of the topic. Well done.
Well written poem. I really liked this!
Very well written poem. I love this take on the prodigal son story. Very imaginative.