The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/08
What a scene! I was giggling through the whole middle of the piece. It is very true to life and you put me right there. As a fly on the wall, not the teacher, thank goodness! Excellent!
01/28/08
Very realistic writing. I've been there with 6 pre-k kids for VBS. It pretty much went just like this. Right on topic!
Ouch! Tomorrow will be better. Great kid dialog. Keep it up.
01/28/08
Super--I could feel Miss Perkins' mounting panic...I don't usually care for all-dialog pieces, but it really worked here.
Great dialogue. Delightful story.
01/28/08
ROFL! I liked how your title tied in at the end. I didn't realize that this was an all dialouge piece, I was completely caught up in the hilarious happenings and your MC's delightful frustrations that escalated to the point where she finally admitted that she needed some help. This was just too funny! ^_^
01/29/08
ROFL This is great! And my husband wonders why I don't want to open up an after-school care for kids! LOL