The Official Writing Challenge
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Now I am crying. Sad story but true for so many....may the Lord pick up the shattered pieces....
Superb writing--your words absolutely set the tone for this sad, sad piece. Simply excellent.
Excellent story... the tone is well-done, just enough details to get the picture. Perfect for the topic.
A perfect illustration and great writing. Excellent.
Heartbreaking. The spare style of your writing matched the starkness of her life. The part where she is reminded of what she lost is devastating. Excellent.
You painted a vivid picture with few words. Even when we can get a hand on that one in the bush, it can still elude our grasp.
Excellent job of conveying the sadness of regret.
Very evocative - your descriptions are so vivid and the emotions so real. Excellent.