The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/08
Now I am crying. Sad story but true for so many....may the Lord pick up the shattered pieces....
01/17/08
Superb writing--your words absolutely set the tone for this sad, sad piece. Simply excellent.
01/17/08
Excellent story... the tone is well-done, just enough details to get the picture. Perfect for the topic.
A perfect illustration and great writing. Excellent.
01/21/08
Heartbreaking. The spare style of your writing matched the starkness of her life. The part where she is reminded of what she lost is devastating. Excellent.
You painted a vivid picture with few words. Even when we can get a hand on that one in the bush, it can still elude our grasp.
Excellent job of conveying the sadness of regret.
01/26/08
Very evocative - your descriptions are so vivid and the emotions so real. Excellent.