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Interesting and thought provoking. I was confused - was Elizabeth in a car or a truck? This article should make us remember Job, too - look what he lost, then gained back.
This is a good story but it's a dark story. While I usually prefer stories with happy endings we all need an occasional reminder from the other side of reality. While sermons that focus on love are generally the way to go, a periodic fire and brimstone sermon is good for the soul. This is exceptionally well written. Thank you.
How many Evas are there out there, with crippled lives because they tried to fill shoes that weren't made for them. A sad story, but a meaningful and appropriate message. Good work.
Wow. This is very good and powerful.

Just a few comments: I think you might have written Anna where you mean Elizabeth at the bottom. I'm not sure. Also, there are a few places where some quotation marks might be helpful.

This is a great story! Good job.