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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Doctor/Nurse (11/02/06)

TITLE: Guardian Angels
By Edy T Johnson
11/06/06


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"Andrews! What are you doing dressed like that?"

PFC Andrews, one of my corpsmen, just walked onto Ward 1 at the 93rd Evac Hospital. Skinny, bespeckled, cocky teenager, he wears his full battle uniform, including his M-16.

"I'm gonna be guarding you, tonight, Ma'am."

I'm stunned. It's the first time I realize my corpsmen have duty besides patient care. Andrews bounces through the length of the ward to exit out the west door. He will be in the guard tower on the perimeter fence, tonight, just past the ditch beyond the door.

Yesterday, I learned something else new. Alone, or so I thought, with my patients on the 72-bed, X-shaped ward, I discovered Specialist Kelly at work in a far corner.

"Kelly, didn't you hear? You're supposed to report for weapons inspection."

"Yes, Ma'am. But, I don't need to report."

"Oh, but you do. They said all corpsmen have to...."

"No, Ma'am. I'm a C. O. I'm not required to report. I don't have a weapon."

Again, I am stunned. My esteem for this combat medic soars even higher. He hasn't shirked hazardous duty with his conscientious-objector status. My Haight-Ashbury flower-child-artist corpsman has to be braver than many. Like doctors, nurses and other healthcare personnel carrying the Geneva Convention card as noncombatants, Kelly is here, unarmed. He is doing his duty while still honoring his convictions. I am impressed.

This is nursing in a combat zone. This is Long Binh Post, Republic of Viet Nam, 1968.

I rather like the 12-hour night shift. The Armed Forces channel on the television sets that sit on a high shelf at the far corner of each wing has signed off with the National Anthem. Time for lights out along the four aisles radiating out from the nurses' station at the center. The ward is quiet, except for the low rumble of B-52s out somewhere on the horizon, targeting enemy maneuvers.

Even though the temperature is above mid-seventies, I shiver in my field jacket. It's at least 30 degrees cooler than daytime, and I guess my blood is too thin to keep me warm in the night. We don't have air-conditioning here, unless you count cross-draft from the four entrances and the windows. At night we shut the doors, of course.

Time for my rounds down the eight, long rows of old metal hospital beds, army cots, and even bunk beds at the far end of each wing. Closest to the nurses' station sit the beds with the severest casualties that need most attention. All the IV drips are on time, according to the strip of white tape, marked off by the hour to assure just the right amount of medicated fluid is given. I double-check the rate, counting the drops per minute splashing in the drip-chamber. I check body casts and dressings for bleeding, outlining with a marking pen where the stain has increased beyond earlier such marks. Some dressings need reinforcement and fresh ice packs to halt bleeding into field-contaminated wounds left open for drainage to avoid infection.

Stateside, I would shine my flashlight against my white uniform to view my patient in the reflected light, as I check their breathing. Here, wearing my green jungle fatigues, the light is too muted. So, I shine the light onto the sheet or pillowcase. My brave, strong, soldiers, medicated for pain in some cases, sleep like so many little brothers.

Rounds finished, the last walking-wounded soldier (sitting at the desk to tell me his stories) gone to bed, I tell my two corpsmen to grab an empty bunk at the end of a ward and get some sleep. I appreciate, now, how much they need it, since they do double-duty. I can always wake them for help, if necessary.

Before turning to the charts waiting at the desk, I survey my sphere of responsibility bathed in the light of a single florescent lamp at the nurses' station. I shoot up a prayer for safety for PFC Andrews, watching over us from the guard tower.

Suddenly, a thought strikes me, stinging my eyes with tears. Here I stand, responsible for all these defenders of freedom, while they sleep in blissful peace, trusting a solitary nurse for their safety. It's almost as if I am their guardian angel. And they can sleep because I am here.

As I pick up my pen, I thank the Lord I can trust Him to surround us all with His holy angels.


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Valora Otis11/10/06
What a gift to be able to go back in time and be able to look into a brave nurse's heart. I loved this sentence,"My brave, strong, soldiers, medicated for pain in some cases, sleep like so many little brothers." There were a couple of mistakes, but neither took away from the story. As a child, my father served in Vietnam. If he'd been wounded, I would have wanted my father attended by an angel like you. God bless you for serving your country with all your heart.
LaNell Koenig-Wilson11/14/06
I thought your article was wonderful. It evoked vivid pictures in my mind and I wondered if my husband, who was a nurse in the Air Force experienced similar feelings. God Bless our "Angels" in uniform and thank God for our Guardian Angels that surround us!
david grant11/16/06
a florescent DAVEY lamp for this inspiring story. Thank you for sharing it.
Val Clark11/16/06
Strong slice of life story. Captivating with a onvincing voice that revealed the heart of the nurse. Very visual.
Marilee Alvey11/16/06
Your story reads so well. You seem so at ease with words and imagery. Nothing seems contrived. The pace is, somehow, relaxed, even with the word limit. You said it and said it well even with the restrictions given to you. You know what was the coolest thing? You had us focus on the conscientious objector and we thought that was the story, then you caught us by surprise so that we were as surprised as your narrator was when the thought occured to her that she was a guardian angel. We hadn't been considering that thought, either! You are a talented writer.
Marilyn Schnepp 11/16/06
Absolutely riveting Edy! Such a detailed scene of another Korean M*A*S*H - but in the Viet Nam era. Oh, how I hate war: but Oh how you have made our Heroes "Real" in this story...loved it! And great title. God Bless.
Ann FitzHenry11/18/06
Oh Edy! This is beautiful. I loved your story from start to finish. Bless you for being a guardian angel for so many!
Laurie Glass11/18/06
Thanks for taking us on this journey. This kind of experience is beyond what I can imagine myself. No wonder you made it into the top 40. Great job.
Edy T Johnson 11/18/06
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Donald Paulson03/25/07
I remember the days - taped IV bags/bottles, counting drip rates, reflected light to monitor pts...
You were a Guardian Angel. Thank you for serving!


   
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