The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/06
I'd love to brighten your day with an intelligent critique or comment; but I would only be broadcasting my own ignorance. (which I am obviously doing now) There are many who write Free Verse...and will understand every word, and appreciate your deep thoughts; but I've never been able to get the hang of it. Sorry, not YOUR fault, but mine. Keep on doing your thing! Kudos!...and God Bless.
10/13/06
A fine sweeping free verse challenge to the enemy of our souls. I like it! One of Dave's Favs this week.
10/14/06
Skillful use of word sounds here! Love the lyrical quality in this free verse! And yes, you're right on topic too! Great job!
10/17/06
Good use of sounds and visualization. I am not sure of the structure, the first stanza almost worked into a sonnet - I think with some combinations and measuring you might pull that off - just a suggestion.