The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/06
I'd love to brighten your day with an intelligent critique or comment; but I would only be broadcasting my own ignorance. (which I am obviously doing now) There are many who write Free Verse...and will understand every word, and appreciate your deep thoughts; but I've never been able to get the hang of it. Sorry, not YOUR fault, but mine. Keep on doing your thing! Kudos!...and God Bless.
10/13/06
A fine sweeping free verse challenge to the enemy of our souls. I like it! One of Dave's Favs this week.
Skillful use of word sounds here! Love the lyrical quality in this free verse! And yes, you're right on topic too! Great job!
10/17/06
Good use of sounds and visualization. I am not sure of the structure, the first stanza almost worked into a sonnet - I think with some combinations and measuring you might pull that off - just a suggestion.