The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
Your Title was the lure. I came, I read, and I was intrigued by the visions of rain, rain and more rain - and how it nourished the earth...but the Topic of "river", I did not find. However; I always enjoy entries that are short, sweet and to the point; the point being: the rains will come again, and the gods will dance again...but me? I'm still looking for the river.
Seriously - I loved the writing, the thoughts and the poetic view of rain. Very nice.
09/09/06
PS: Now, with explanation in hand and picturesque view in mind (thanks to the author), I Love this short, sweet and absolutely beautiful essay on a river. Enchanting!
09/09/06
Nice word picture here: "With desperate lips, the dirt drinks, offering nourishment unto the grass that is now yellow with age."
09/11/06
This was good.