The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/14
You have a very powerful testimony which needs to be heard; though its flow needs to be broken up to give your hearers extra time to catch and to absorb what you are saying.
Joining a buddy group would be a positive step towards developing your skills further.
08/19/14
Amen. Praise God for getting you and your husband through each trial and hurdle. Amazing writing and testimony that will touch many hearts, as it did mine. You should write a book, and share your story with all those who will hear.

God bless you all~
Good message.
You have good thoughts here.

I would divide some and put them in separate paragraphs to make it easier to read and follow your thought.

Keeping our vows should depend on our devotion to God and not a current event or situation.