The Official Writing Challenge
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"expert in God’s beautiful, sacrificial, honorable Christ given transcendent given love?"

I heartily pray that we, as professing, nay, possessing
Christians are.

Thank you. This was most enjoyable . . .
09/12/13
The Last line should read this way?

Am I an expert in God’s beautiful, sacrificial, honorable Christ given transcendent love?

I apologize about the typing error.
09/15/13
Beautiful, powerful, mesmerizing and lovely.

I thought this was amazing.

God bless~
This is lovely. You make the reader stop and think. I personally thought the repetition a bit much and would have loved to see examples of what you shared to help the reader relate more. Though, I'm not musical, I could see this working as a song. You have a sense of passion that flows through the page.