The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/08
Good job. She faces a tough choice - which is exactly what this topic is about.
01/19/08
Great example of the proverb. This felt a bit detail-heavy, but was a good read regardless. Keep writing!
01/22/08
Very good. You did well in drawing us in by describing the thought process that so many of us go through when we have a project in mind, and your ending was perfect.
01/22/08
Right on topic. I love your last line.