The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very nice portrayal of David's gift. Your rhyme and meter are very good, and the poem is uplifting.
03/17/07
What a lovely poem. The rhyming was very well done.
03/19/07
Your poem not only reflects the Psalmist's Heart, but yours as well. You expressed strong feelings of praise for David and his love of God, that echoed your own sentiments. You did this wonderfully well.
A beautiful biblical poem. It is rich in imagery, and I love the story of David. Well-written, and I enjoyed reading every line. God bless, and keep writing.