The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a good handle on your knowledge, but it was very hard to read. Sounds like college textbook stuff.
02/03/07
Solid writing and great grasp on your material.
02/03/07
This is very scholarly, and you've obviously spent a great deal of time in study, yourself. Thank you for sharing it with us.

There are quite a few parenthetical phrases and others put in quotation marks--your piece will actually be easier to read without them, and when they are set aside in that manner, you actually weaken your point.

A much-needed exhortation.
02/04/07
You pointed out the differences between reading and studying in a very straightforward way. Your passion for the Word is evident. Nice work.