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09/07/06
A very inspirational piece on 'Peace Like a River' and prayer. Good progression and exposition.
I whole-heartedly endorse your sentiments.
Well done!
09/09/06
Wonderful exposition - you have great points! I enjoyed this very much - this is also one of my favorite verses!
09/11/06
The way you have divided the verse up into parts and then describe each section makes this piece interesting to read. It also gives you a deeper understanding of the entire verse as you bring it out in picture form and encourage the reader to reflect on their own experience.
I really like the last parpagraph of how you describe the peace of God like a river that then can flow out into the sea to touch the world around us.
Thank you for giving me a vivid picture of His peace!